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As I Sit, I Wait Alone by ~darkestwon:icondarkestwon:



I wait here I sit alone.
At the place I did call home.
The once familiar places known,
Have settled into an uneasy tone.
My world is shattered where I sit,
But for you, I'll hold on a bit.
©2007-2009 ~darkestwon
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More poetry. Yup.
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I do like this alot!
Yes I do!
I think you might be better off with one or two syllables less in that last line...
but It's stilll really good.
Yeah, I see what you mean... I'll go and fix that!
Is that better?

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Got mi-- Wait...
Screw milk, got oxygen?
yup! now it is perfect!
OMG.... you're getting really good at this! :boogie: This one is awesome!

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